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okay, darkened the railway, toned down the newspaper. hope it's better
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in the citaaayy!

pencil, photoshop, photo. more work for S13. what do you guys think, is the rain too much? does it read?

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:iconcenobabe:
Wow... kickass :giggle:

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:iconlanthir44:
I think it works very well. The rain is fine. It's a nice touch, really. I like the background. The lit window adds a great focal point, and there's enough of interest elsewhere to create a visual pathway. Excelent work.

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:icontheabones:
thanks very much! i'm glad the composition works for you, cause i spent a fare amount of time on it
:iconretched-misdemeanor:
Wow, now that is cool. It looks like the kind of thing I would make if I was good at PS. ^^ I like the one lighted window, gives the picture a focal point. The rain is not too much, I like it. But I'm not quite sure about the floating words...
This is amazingly cool, I congratulate you!

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:iconkurtbelcher1:
Damn! That's fantastic. Even better than that last one. I especially like the newspaper on the walls and the wallpaper sky. I think my favorite bit is the shadow cast on the wall by that -- smokestack? in the foreground. And no, I think the rain's just right for this. The steam is perfect, and the color window is great, of course.

Damn you for being so talented! :D
:iconthefatkid:
vury sweet. probably one of the smoothest ones of these yet. you might have trouble with that railroad bridge thing; right now it doesn't contrast enough with the bulidings in the back and it looks like it goes right into the building on the far left. other than than, spiffy.

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:icontheabones:
thank you very much. i thought the words were subtle enough so as not to draw attention, but maybe i was wrong. they are only in that one spot afterall...hmm. i'll take a look at it
:icontheabones:
hmm. you may be right about those tracks. i'm not sure what to do though. don't want them stealing all the focus. should i go lighter or darker, do you think?
:icontheabones:
haha! shucks! i'm pleased with it myself. took a lot of inspiration from benjamin carre and king kong. you should totally check him out

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