more work for s13. pencil and lots and lots of photoshop. the look of this guy pretty much completely changed. it started as a highway. anyway there some things i'm pretty pleased with but i'm a little uneasy with it. as always any and all critiques are appreciated.
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Outlands, Seven13 copyright Broken Doll Studios
I love it. I still like the buildings in the background. I think you've drowned them out with the light to just the right degree and left just enough of a hint of them. It looks great.
I very much like the texture of the water and bridge in the foregound however I feel that the texture is applied a little too liberally and equally making the water and the bridge difficult for me to differentiate. Another critique I have is on the isolation of the background in the fact that it is basically white equally throughout, I feel like the lower most portions of the buildings would be darker where the light would be touching it less, which might bring a little more of the tonality from the front into the back, making them not quite so seperate. I do really like the water in the front and the atmosphere that you've created, and atmosphere I think is something that you do very well in almost all of your pieces.
Compositionally (this may be too much of a pain to try) maybe if you lowered the building in the center of the piece in the background a little it would push the diagonal that you're creating with the buildings to the uppermost part of the bridge giving you a sort of diagonal coming ino the horizontal of the bridge. I like the position of the bridge creating unequal spaces on the top and bottom, which moves the eye.
Anyways, cool piece.
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Compositionally (this may be too much of a pain to try) maybe if you lowered the building in the center of the piece in the background a little it would push the diagonal that you're creating with the buildings to the uppermost part of the bridge giving you a sort of diagonal coming ino the horizontal of the bridge. I like the position of the bridge creating unequal spaces on the top and bottom, which moves the eye.
Anyways, cool piece.
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