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©2006-2009 ~TheABones
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more work for s13. pencil and lots and lots of photoshop. the look of this guy pretty much completely changed. it started as a highway. anyway there some things i'm pretty pleased with but i'm a little uneasy with it. as always any and all critiques are appreciated.
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:icondarkwulf988:
looks like london bridge. this is not my favorite,but hey its betta what i can do ^^.. i do love the coloring

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:iconjofx:
like evrything exept you seem to have made a line through the hole picture... for me this devides it in tow peces... i don't realy like that...
:icontheabones:
hear ya loud and clear. i was going for more of a fold in paper, but yeah, it totally cuts the piece in half. i'll update in a few minutes
:icontheabones:
aww, well what don't you like? or what do you think i could improve?
:iconkurtbelcher1:
I love it. I still like the buildings in the background. I think you've drowned them out with the light to just the right degree and left just enough of a hint of them. It looks great.

Wish I could do that! :D


KAB
:icontheabones:
hopefully that's better. thanks a lot for the help, man
:iconoswald-cobblepot:
the color(s ) is in perfect balance. menacing and warmly at one time! perfect!

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"An artist is never ahead of his time but most people are far behind theirs." - Edgard Varese
:iconboogaloshrimp:
I very much like the texture of the water and bridge in the foregound however I feel that the texture is applied a little too liberally and equally making the water and the bridge difficult for me to differentiate. Another critique I have is on the isolation of the background in the fact that it is basically white equally throughout, I feel like the lower most portions of the buildings would be darker where the light would be touching it less, which might bring a little more of the tonality from the front into the back, making them not quite so seperate. I do really like the water in the front and the atmosphere that you've created, and atmosphere I think is something that you do very well in almost all of your pieces.
Compositionally (this may be too much of a pain to try) maybe if you lowered the building in the center of the piece in the background a little it would push the diagonal that you're creating with the buildings to the uppermost part of the bridge giving you a sort of diagonal coming ino the horizontal of the bridge. I like the position of the bridge creating unequal spaces on the top and bottom, which moves the eye.
Anyways, cool piece.
:icontheabones:
thanks very much. i think i may have inadvertantly stolen some of the color scheme from prince of persia

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